Snehikunnathenthinnu vrudha
Sneham enathu orru vyadha
Snehichidaykayil narajeevan
Swarga thulyamam
Srishtichethethinnu eashwaran
Sneham ennori vikaram
Bhoomiyil sancharipathinnu
Manavanne avahipathinnu
Oruvan mattoruvanne
Kula cheyvathu ee vikaram
Oruvan mattoruvanne
Chathipathu ee vikaram
Sookshichidukil oruvannum
Ee kapadyathinnu irayakilla
Labhipoo ninakku nallathu
Ee jeevithakalam.
1 comment:
Oh ma god,i had a difficult time reading it. one thing i observed is u have written a malayalam poem. so, i feel it could be best displayed in the malayalam font itself. It could create an extra punch to the readers too. I feel u will loose the originality of the poem if you use the english alphabets. Reading the malayalam alphabets (lipikal)gives a different feeling. You can keep the malayalam literature (sahithyam) in tact by doin so. By the way, keeping this apart, it's really a good piece of work. Good, keep it up. Expecting more out of you. :-)
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